Thursday, July 14, 2011

Fio in Despair

Fiorella is praying for strength and guidance right now because she feels weak and clueless. That NY editor turned her down, saying she liked Fio's voice, pacing, and characters, but the story didn't have a hook to make it stand out on the the publisher's list.

What the heck does that mean and what does Fio do now? Wasn't "she knew everything about sex but nothing about pleasure while he knew everything about pleasure but nothing about love" enough?

1 comment:

Gary said...

Next time try "kissin' don't last, cookin' does"