Monday, June 22, 2020

Monday Starts Off Well

With the aid of her children and friends, Fiorella will survive. Bastrop son is staying with her for a week to take over the heavy labor, to identify items like old photo slides, and to keep her from throwing away electronic wonders that she would otherwise have disposed of to Goodwill, and, most important, to give her some company. Later in the summer, Minnesota son and his wife will be visiting and take up where Bastrop son left off.
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Speaking of leaving off, Son showed Fio how to find where she had left off writing without having to go through the previous 200 pages. He also taught her how to delete pages.
     Lolly, the roadblocks are coming down. To celebrate, here's a sample of your story:

     Waverly lowered her voice to a whisper. "That girl in the tight pink shirt--she was in my Brit Lit class this summer and had every male in my class buzzing around her. I don't think a single one of them heard I word I said all semester."
      Cotton cleared his throat. "She--uh-has that effect."
     Didn't Waverly understand what Lolly did to guys? Ignoring her would be like ignoring a house on fire. He couldn't help but glance over at her, pink shirt and all. In fact, he'd spotted her leaning over the railing of the bridged entrance to the compound the second they came around the bend in the trail.









    

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