Fiorella is shelving Lolly's story. The divine Liza says it won't fly because the hero is eleven years older than the heroine and their first sexual encounter is unusual--not kinky, but unusual.
Fio's a little gun-shy right now. She's always written on the edge and is afraid she doesn't know how to pull back.
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Their first sexual encounter is unusual--not kinky, but unusual. Must be pretty unusual. Describe, Fiorella? Please?
Maybe since he is so much older, something shocked him that we would not be bothered by. That's it. The kinky sex and the age worked together. And I bet this agent is lots older than us, 65?. Just explain to your editor. Get her to visualize the scene. Get her involved.
Sorry, Fio has decided to let this ms sit for about five years till she's queening it over Nora Roberts so she isn't giving away any of its
shocking action at this time.
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